RHH: Rate/Hate my latest verse?

Orgasmic s*it right there dunny....the rhyme scheme isin't original but it's flawless and the image of the sandwich is a one of beauty. I really enjoyed the first line, I think it's a real message instead of all this s*it we hear every day on the radio...mad props for your alliteration throughout, it takes something special to craft such a short but solid and mind-f*cking verse. 10/10