How could i make this story better and your opinion on it?

Ok so im making a fanime and I'm using the song 'Meg and Dia-Monster' for the opening.It's about a girl called Dia who has two male friends in middle school.(Please help for some names).Both the boys love Dia (cliche).One night Dia is out parting with them.(Dia is a wild child)Also she was drinking.One of the boys (with black hair the other has blonde) the black haired boy loves Dia in an innocent way however the blonde boy has more evil intentions in mind.The blonde boy needs to make Dia never forgive the boy with black hair so he intertwines his evil thoughts about Dia with this.He buys a black wig and takes a drunken Dia to an alley way.Dia was raped.It's about her finding out the truth and her struggle with what happened.All the girls at school bully her and call her a 'dirty slut' or a 'whore'.Any ideas or changes or things that could happen would be fantastic.